Let's see. I can either A) Draw Karma B) Write Claris or C) Do more revisions to the first half of Claris.
Probably going to be A, though I've been thinking often on Claris revision. I'm removing many scenes from the first half completely--nothing integral to the story, mostly things that are just stupid or were products of my own self-indulgence, and either just leaving it or replacing it with a scene of more relevance (and better writing). I'm also putting in more references to the angels. I don't think they'll actually interact with Claris and them until near the end, like usual, but they'll be there, watching, like shadows on a wall. But not doing anything just yet... (this also means I'll have to a bit of revision to the second half, to mention that the watching was taking place.. but I'll probably go back and revise all of that again when I'm done anyway, so)
Probably going to be A, though I've been thinking often on Claris revision. I'm removing many scenes from the first half completely--nothing integral to the story, mostly things that are just stupid or were products of my own self-indulgence, and either just leaving it or replacing it with a scene of more relevance (and better writing). I'm also putting in more references to the angels. I don't think they'll actually interact with Claris and them until near the end, like usual, but they'll be there, watching, like shadows on a wall. But not doing anything just yet... (this also means I'll have to a bit of revision to the second half, to mention that the watching was taking place.. but I'll probably go back and revise all of that again when I'm done anyway, so)
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