Speakin' of Claris-y things, I pretty much rewrote the second half of the first part's third chapter. It's all Donovan baby. =P You can read it if you like; I'll probably work on it a little more before I declare it fully edited. The first and second chapters have also been edited, and I'm going through the others slowly, though it was these three that needed the most work. Because after the third chapter I wised up and stopped using characters based on my damn friends so much. But I intend to go through all of them and smooth them out, then go over it AGAIN and smooth out any wrinkles I forgot, and then I'll do the same to the second half when it is done.